A descriptive composition about a place or building consist of:
- an introduction in which you give the name and the location of the place and /or the reason for choosing it;
- a main body in which you describe the main aspects of the place or building in detail - for example, when you describe a place you should describe what you can see and do there; when you describe a building you should describe its exterior and interior, as well as give hisrorical facts about it;
- a conclusion which includes your comments / feelings / final thoughts and / or recommendation.
Descriptions of places or buildings can be found in tourist magazines, travel brochures, stories, letters, etc. The style you use depends on the situation and the intended reader. For example, in an article for a magazine you should use semi-formal style and a polite, respectful tone. You normally use present tenses to describe a place / building. You use past tenses to write ablout the historical facts.
Now, it is your turn to describe your place. Write your descriptions in the comments.

Ireland has a lot to offer those Who decide to visit the island. Its geographic location as a shield of Europe to the inclemency of the Atlantic.
ResponderEliminarTHE weather in Ireland is very varied, for this reason its landscapes often look like magical and mystical. The cliff of Moher its a beutiful landscapes of Ireland.
In this cliff you can take an amazing boat tour along of the mighty cliff coast and also you can to do Cycling on the picturesque path that crosses along the cliff.
Dou you want a unforgettable vacation?, you must visit Ireland
José F. González
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Winterfell is the ancestral home of the Royal Stark House. It is a very large castle located in the North of the continent of Westeros. From where the head of the house Stark governs his people.
ResponderEliminarThe view of the castle from the royal roads is really amazing. This castle is located on hot springs that keep the castle warm even in the worst winters. Sinuous tombs beneath the castle contain the remains of the Stark kings and record the history of the ancient family. It also has mysterious corridors built so that their masters can escape.
Knowing this castle is without a doubt something you would never forget.
Luis A. Arias
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ResponderEliminarIn the mexican state of Quintana Roo is an extraordinary tourist destination called Bacalar, also known as a Laguna de los siete colores that stands out for its stunning view.
This beautiful lagoon has different shades of blue, here tourists can practice different sports such as surfing and motorboat racing. In addition to one side of the lagoon is El Cenote Azul, an amazing place that stands out for its crystal clear waters and where you can dive to enjoy the unique plant and animal life.
Bacalar is the perfect place to rest and enjoy your vacation. You can't miss this incredible adventure.
Citlhali E. Reyes
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Paris is a big impressive city in the north of France, it is a great city and there's plenty of sites to visit and discover.
ResponderEliminarParis is especially known for its museums and architectural landmarks: the Louvre was the most visited art museum in the world in 2018. The city's top tourist attraction is the Notre Dame Cathedral and the Eiffel Tower.
I like Paris, I think it’s the best place in Europe to visit, especially for its food.
Julian Brandt
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Paris is a big impressive city in the north of France, it is a great city and there's plenty of sites to visit and discover, like for its monuments, football stadium, food and shops.
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I like Paris, I think it’s the best place in Europe to visit, especially because Paris is the culinary capital of the world and is known worldwide for its gourmet cuisine.
Julian Brandt
London, is the capital and largest city of England and the United Kingdom is a great city of the 21st century with a history that goes back to Roman times.
ResponderEliminarThis amazing city offers the imposing Palace of the Parliament, the tower of the iconic "Big Ben" clock and the Westminster Abbey, place of the British monarchical coronations.
Some of its famous activities are a tour of the Chelsea FC stadium and a bus tour up and down for all the city.
I recommend visiting the Madame Tussauds London and take a picture with your favorite artists.
Estefania Quinto
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London, is the capital and the largest city of England and the United Kingdom. It is a great city of the 21st century with a history that goes back to Roman times.
EliminarThis amazing city offers the imposing Palace of the Parliament, the tower of the iconic "Big Ben" clock and the Westminster Abbey, place of the British monarchical coronations. Some of its famous activities are a tour of the Chelsea FC stadium and a bus tour up and down for all the city.
It is a historic city that you will love if you visit, I recommend you take many photos with your favorite artists in the Madame Tussauds London.
Estefania Quinto
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ResponderEliminarAmalfi coast.
ResponderEliminarThe beautiful Amalfi coast stretches for 50 km of coastline along the southern tip of the Sorrentina peninsula, in Italy, located in the Gulf of Salerno, in the homonymous province of the Campania region.
It is a popular holiday destination with colorful villages, vertical cliffs and small beaches where you can fish and swim. Its rural areas bear witness to the adaptability of the inhabitants who have taken advantage of the diversity of the land of cultivation.
The Amalfi Coast is the ideal place to spend a holiday and relax enjoying the majestic coast and the vineyards and terraced orchards on the lower slopes.
Fernando A. Sánchez.
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Bora Bora is a Pacific island in the territory of French Polynesia. It has a tropical climate.
ResponderEliminarIt’s surrounded by coral reefs, with a large lagoon and a spacious harbor on the west side. The island has 12 four and five star hotels, including a Club Med. Other industries include deep sea commercial fishing and the production of copra, vanilla and mother of pearl.
Bora Bora is one of the few places on earth that everyone hopes to witness in their lifetime and once you see it, you are forever enamored.
Once seen, Bora Bora is never forgotten. From the day you arrive until the moment you part ways.
Amairani Villarreal
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In the State of New York, USA, is the New York City, known worldwide as the largest city in the United States and the one with the largest number of inhabitants. Located on the northeast coast of the USA.
ResponderEliminarNew York, known as the city that never sleeps, is a center of culture and attraction; It houses a large number of museums on art, photography, architecture, technology, natural history, television and radio, the main ones being the Metropolitan Museum, the Guggenheim Museum.
I recommend visiting the famous Fifth Avenue, where you will find the most luxurious and expensive shops in the world.
Carlos U. Izquierdo
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Iceland is a small island located in northwestern europe, the weather is cold and snowing there.
ResponderEliminarIcelan´s blue blue bubbling geysers,rugged lava fields and spectacular glaciers create a visual spectacle that seems out of this world. Icelan´s funky capital is bursting whit festival, arts galleries and stylish bars while off shore, whale watching excursions are offered year-roud. Natural splendor aside, the Land of Fire and Ice is one of the world's quirkiest nations, with warm, creative and forward-thinking residents whit a strong sense of national pride.
So the iceland experience is definitely one not to be missed.
Ricardo de la Cruz
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China is located in East Asia, it is a large country with many destinations offers magnificent and varied sites and a rich culture.
ResponderEliminarChina is a very populated place where you can see hutongs whit tradicional house next to large avenues and modern skyscrapes, observe the Terracota warriors in Xi'an,Admire the stone stone monument of the Great Buddha of Leshan, the tallest in the world. For lovers of romanticism the Suzhou Classical Gardens are a good place to visit.
China it offers lodging facilities near restaurants, markets as well as a parking with good location
Every year, lovers of traditional art and lovers of exotic food visit China,why don’t you?
Wendy Fabiola Diaz de los Santos
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ResponderEliminarBaja California Sur is a paradise for lovers of sports and wildlife, its climate is an earthly paradise for surfers and allows golf games throughout the year, boat trips to Isla Espiritu Santo to observe whales and swim with sea lions. Its pristine beaches are excellent for water sports and also in Cabo Plumo, you can dive in the coral reefs.
ResponderEliminarOnce in Baja California, we recommend visiting Los Cabos located at the southern tip of the Baja California peninsula, Los Cabos is a unique blend of desert landscapes, beaches and mountainous areas that are a sight to behold.
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Puebla is one of the states that make up the United Mexican States with 6 168 883 habitants. Its capital and most populated city is Puebla de Zaragoza. The weather in Puebla is cold and fresh. In the summer it reaches temperatures of 22 Celsius degree. You can find fruit trees such as grapes, apples, peaches and pears.
ResponderEliminarThe city of Puebla de Zaragoza is amazing, you can visit the train museum with more than 100 types. Next Then you can visit the Puebla Cathedral a rich architectural heritage. In Puebla de Zaragoza is the luxurious Cuauhtémoc stadium.
At night you can adventure to the blue planetarium and white exhibitor center Puebla. You can enter the magical towns of the state as they are: Cholula, zacatlan de las manzanas, and pahuatlan. Admire the Great Pyramid of Cholula or Tlachihualtépetl is the largest pyramidal in the world on 400 meters per side and 4,500,000 m³ in volume. Visit the majestic Popocatepetl with a height of 5,426 meters
They tourist describe Puebla as a pacific, cold state and beautiful. A place that you must visit to contemplate the greatness of zacatlan, Puebla is the crystal viewpoint of the ravine with amazing view.
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Puebla is one of the states that make up the United Mexican States with 6 168 883 habitants. Its capital and most populated city is Puebla de Zaragoza. The weather in Puebla is cold and fresh. In the summer it reaches temperatures of 22 Celsius degree. You can find fruit trees such as grapes, apples, peaches and pears.
EliminarThe city of Puebla de Zaragoza is amazing, you can visit the train museum with more than 100 types. Next you can visit the Puebla Cathedral a rich architectural heritage. In Puebla de Zaragoza is the luxurious Cuauhtémoc stadium.
At night you can adventure to the blue planetarium and white exhibitor center Puebla. You can enter the magical towns of the state as they are: Cholula, zacatlan de las manzanas, and pahuatlan. Admire the Great Pyramid of Cholula or Tlachihualtépetl is the largest pyramidal in the world on 400 meters per side and 4,500,000 m³ in volume. You could visit the majestic Popocatepetl with a height of 5,426 meters
The tourists describe Puebla as a pacific, cold and beautiful state. A place that you must visit to contemplate the greatness of zacatlan, Puebla you can admire the great crystal viewpoint of the ravine with amazing view. To teach the right way about true love is to make a better world. Visit Puebla...
Japan is located in East Asia, in the Pacific Ocean. If you are looking and an archipelago of islands, history and a slightly cold weather so, you'll love.
ResponderEliminarWhether you wish to visit hot springs or temples, see the beautiful cherry trees or enjoy the incredible seasons of the year to the fullest, Japan will fulfill your expectations.
It's one of the most beautiful places with incredible landscapes but also has inmense buildings, implemented with impressive technology.
Every thousands of visitors choose to the beautiful surrounding and for you will not be the exception. It's the best place for visit.
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Japan is located in East Asia, in the Pacific Ocean. If you are looking and an archipelago of islands, history and a slightly cold weather so, you'll love.
ResponderEliminarWhether you wish to visit hot springs or temples, see the beautiful cherry trees or enjoy the incredible seasons of the year to the fullest, Japan will fulfill your expectations.
It's one of the most beautiful places with incredible landscapes but also has inmense buildings, implemented with impressive technology.
Every thousands of visitors choose to the beautiful surrounding and for you will not be the exception. It's the best place for visit.
Sarahi Palma Agulo
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EliminarQuebec is old Canadian proviene.It is the second most populous province of Canada after Ontorio.This place only speaking french.It is located in the Eastern part of Canadá and part of central of Canada.It is an ancient province.
ResponderEliminarIn this place,you can do some activities as soon as you can enjoy them.One of the best activity is to observe the whales in the river of Zodiac.Other activity is to walk around the downtown and you will know the city.Quebec have delicious old-modern spicy typical foods,toutiere is prepared with minced park,beef paper and potatoes.
Quebec is the most beautiful place around the world, you will have the best experience in this place.You can travel to Quebec and you will get the best vacations.
Francisca A. Reyes
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Puerto Rico is an island of the Caribbean and an unincorporated territory of the United States of America with a landscape of mountains, waterfalls and the tropical forest "El Yunque".
ResponderEliminarIn San Juan, the capital and big city, the area of Isla Verde is famous for its strip of hotels, beach bars and casinos. the old San Juan neighborhood has colorful buildings of Spanish colonial style and the enormous fortresses of El Morro and La Fortaleza, both built centuries ago.
English and Spanish have been the official languages of Puerto Rico, in addition to the fact that the island is composed of volcanic rocks that are in the contact zone between the tectonic plates of the Caribbean and North America, the island is currently being deformed by the efforts made in said area, such efforts can cause earthquakes and storm surges.
Puerto Rico becomes a beautiful place to spend the holidays, but it carries to the worry and the fear of not knowing at what moment the seismic events can be predicted, accompanied by landslides, represented by geologists as the most dangerous geological disasters of the island.
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San Francisco is located at the north end of the San Francisco Peninsula, with the Pacific Ocean to the west. San Francisco is characterized by its Mediterranean climate with mild wet winters and dry summers. The place where arts and culture flourish.
ResponderEliminarThe Golden Gate Bridge, This magnificent bridge is the most famous bridge in San Francisco and is one of the seven wonders of the world. On both sides the bridge has viewpoints where you can enjoy the most beautiful view, If you want to walk there is Golden Gate Park one of the largest urban parks in the world. With attractions such as the Great Dutch Mill, the garden of fragrances, designed for obvious visitors, or Shakespeare's garden, with more than 200 works quoted in his work.
San Francisco is the perfect place to rest and enjoy its incredible landscapes. Without missing a visit to Grace cathedral.
Jesús reyes
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ResponderEliminarVenice is considered the most beautifull city in Italy and one of the most romantic cities in the world. In venice you can enjoy its particular channels ass well as its buildings and tourist places.
Its tourist atraccions are; its museums, palaces, churches, and fountains are part of its decoration that fascinates tourist. In venice there is a varied gastronomic offer.
They hadle affordable prices, even the most elegant and sophisticated restaurants. You will find markest, sophiscated glass factories where some of the items are sold like carnival mask.
The city most recommended are to stay is the district of San Marcos.
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ResponderEliminarVilla La Paz located in Matehuala, SLP, It's a mining town with great historical backwardness to explore and enjoy.
ResponderEliminarIn this magical place is the library "León Felipe" which have very recent books to some dating from the fourth century, there's also the theater "El Pilar" which was once a light plant that fed the people and the mines of painters and San Miguel was adapted as a theater, conserving its instrumentation and providing a great experience for this visitors.
Villa La Paz or La Paz as its inhabitants know it's a small place with pleasant climate and very warm people.
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ResponderEliminarReal de catorce It is considered a tourist place and very beautiful because it was a large mining center located in San Luis Potosí.
ResponderEliminarthe miners extracted silver La Plata but as they continued to dig they found a water table which flooded the mine and was cclosd, turning it into a tourist place where you can visit the thickets of the semi desert, the sacred places of Huicholes, tours in the mine and the museum of the first mint of Mexico.
Real de catorce It is the most recommended place to visit in San Luis Potosí.
Evilin Y. Castañon Mendoza
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Real de Catorce located in the municipality called Catorce of San Luis Potosí, is considered a tourist and very beautiful place.
EliminarIf you want to have fun, you really have to travel in a car called Willys, where you will be filled with adrenaline and you will be able to enjoy the incredible landscape. The main attraction is walking along its cobbled streets while enjoying the quiet atmosphere that is breathed in this town. You can live the experience of riding a horse to get to the ghost town and to Wirikuta, the landscapes along the entire route are truly spectacular.
You can’t miss the opportunity to visit such a beautiful place like Real de Catorce.
Evilin Y. Castañon
Matehuala is a city and municipality belonging to the state of San Luis Potosí, its name refers to the war cry of indigenous people of the region.
ResponderEliminarMatehuala was one of the most important regions for the wealth of San Luis Potosí to the exploitation in gold and silver deposits. which in colonial times allowed to diversify its architecture.
The church in Matehuala has the same design of Saint Joseph, Lyon, France, with a sober facade and a splendid portico, of Gothic and Byzantine style, built in gray quarry.
It is a nice place to live together with your family.
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Cedral is a municipality of San Luis Potosi. The municipality is located in the north of the state. It is a beautiful, peaceful and welcoming place.
ResponderEliminarThe weather is semi-desert but its flora and fauna are reallycvast and wonderfull. it is a popular destination for archeologists because there were found first settlements of humans. The municipality has an ancient church, that was building by an architect that also builds several buildings of the capital.
I recomend Cedral Because it is a quiet, amazing and unpolluted place, with delicious food and amazing people in Cedral you feel free and happy
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ResponderEliminarCedral is a municipality of San Luis Potosi, located in the north of the state. It is a beautiful and welcoming place that has a semi-desert weather.
ResponderEliminarIf you like history, Cedral is your place, because, there were found the first settlement of humans, also, you can visit the ancient church, that was built by an architect that also built several buildings of the capital. You can take photos of the place while you walk enjoying the beautiful sights and do not forget to learn how to dance Huapango, and of course, you can not leave the place without taste the soft toffee.
Do you want to travel to a magnificent place? Go to Cedral.
Cedral is a municipality of San Luis Potosi, located in the north of the state. It is a beautiful and welcoming place that has a semi-desert weather.
ResponderEliminarIf you like history, Cedral is your place, because, there were found the first settlement of humans, also, you can visit the ancient church, that was built by an architect that also built several buildings of the capital. You can take photos of the place while you walk enjoying the beautiful sights and do not forget to learn how to dance Huapango, and of course, you can not leave the place without taste the soft toffee.
Do you want to travel to a magnificent place? Go to Cedral.
Valeria Michelle